Oh, my god. Thank you so much! This review was just as if someone gave me a huge box of chocolates and champagne and flowers and just swept me off my feet. I am so very happy that you have reread my story. That means you really liked it, and that just gives me a warm fuzzy feeling.
I'm glad you liked Bruce, too. I agree that he doesn't have to be mean, even if he is complicated and intense and scary and paranoid and sexy and manipulative.
And I'm so pleased you enjoyed the ending. Like I said, initially, Bruce was nowhere in this fic, but he just showed up and wound up kissing Bruce. I'm thrilled that you think the kiss was hot, too. I can't write smut--I'm still trying--but this seemed to work.
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback; it means a lot to me.
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Date: 2007-06-26 03:29 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked Bruce, too. I agree that he doesn't have to be mean, even if he is complicated and intense and scary and paranoid and sexy and manipulative.
And I'm so pleased you enjoyed the ending. Like I said, initially, Bruce was nowhere in this fic, but he just showed up and wound up kissing Bruce. I'm thrilled that you think the kiss was hot, too. I can't write smut--I'm still trying--but this seemed to work.
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback; it means a lot to me.