Wow, you're fast. And, man, do I love your feedback. It never fails to make me smile, so if I could keep you grinning, it's all to the good.
I'm actually pretty relieved you liked it. I was afraid it was terrible, because it's been so long for these two. I thought for sure I was finished writing this pairing, and then those pictures...well, I had to do something and the first line of this just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote the damned thing.
As for Clark's aggressiveness and Oliver's awe of him, for the life of me, I cannot seem to write these guys with a different dynamic. This fic started out with Clark being all young and innocent and Oliver seducing him, but partway through (and it's fairly obvious in the writing, I'm sure), Clark took over, the way he always seems to when I write him with Oliver. Huh. LOL
Even after your wonderful review, I'm still not sure if this is any good, but at least it made you smile, so I can feel good about that. You are several hundred different kinds of incredible. :-D
Re: OMG C/OLLIE!!!!!!!
Date: 2008-09-13 11:53 am (UTC)I'm actually pretty relieved you liked it. I was afraid it was terrible, because it's been so long for these two. I thought for sure I was finished writing this pairing, and then those pictures...well, I had to do something and the first line of this just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote the damned thing.
As for Clark's aggressiveness and Oliver's awe of him, for the life of me, I cannot seem to write these guys with a different dynamic. This fic started out with Clark being all young and innocent and Oliver seducing him, but partway through (and it's fairly obvious in the writing, I'm sure), Clark took over, the way he always seems to when I write him with Oliver. Huh. LOL
Even after your wonderful review, I'm still not sure if this is any good, but at least it made you smile, so I can feel good about that. You are several hundred different kinds of incredible. :-D