Not only did the original scene bother me greatly, but the fact that sometimes fanfic writers put a bat (as a weapon) in the hands of one of the gang like it's the most common of things drives me nuts.
Very intense. From Justin hearing the bat in the diner to Brian facing off against Debbie, very powerful and painful reactions. Excellent job.
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Date: 2007-11-06 12:40 pm (UTC)Very intense. From Justin hearing the bat in the diner to Brian facing off against Debbie, very powerful and painful reactions. Excellent job.
Lisa