Hi! Just discovered you through a meta post of romany's, and your comments were so insightful I decided to stop on by, and I'm glad I did!

So... comments of substance: I really like the last two lines, and find your use of the subjunctive (?) really interesting. How you use the phrase will be, will want, etc. So instead of Clark wanting to make the world a better place right now, he's only going to want it later. I don't know if that was intentional or even actually true, but it was interesting. Like Superman and Clark are completely different people.